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Starting a sentence with “and”?
And why would that be an issue? Because I don’t see an issue here. But sometimes, it can be annoying, that’s true. Not this time, though, I don’t think it’s misplaced here. Or maybe I’m just reading the excerpt at a different pace than you, which might make it sound better in my head than in yours. But that’s just a theory :3