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Cake day: November 12th, 2023

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  • Yeah, I’m not sure what’s going on here, but it’s not good. For whatever reason, the author is revealing too many disparate plot points too quickly.

    It makes sense that they don’t (yet) add up to reveal the secrets behind everything - that’s just a fundamental part of how mysteries work.

    But they have to be connected in some way and they have to be revealed at a reasonable pace and just as part of the unfolding story, so that everything flows naturally, and that’s not what’s happening.

    I still have hope for it, and if nothing else, the central mysteries are still intriguing. I just really hope it settles down.






  • And… another chapter at the end of which I was just going, “Mm… okay. Whatever.”

    I think the problem here is that the author has a really convoluted story in mind and is afraid they’re not going to get a chance to let it unfold slowly (which is a very real possibility - the axe is ever-looming). But so they’re erring in the opposite direction - trying to reveal too many enticing details and hints and mysteries without enough context or breathing room. Which unfortunately also ups the chance that it’ll get axed before the whole story is told.

    Hoping it settles down to a reasonable pace. And doesn’t get axed before the story gets told.