I like the coloring of the right panel more than the left, but my wife is the other way around. Can anyone here way in, before I go further?
watch out for the nightmare patent troll that has prevented non-linear stories for decades.
What can you explain? I plan on making a choose your own adventure story. Hell you can publish those.
Check out Chooseco and Netflix
You’ve got my curiosity
https://www.reddit.com/r/FanFiction/s/DeXB6PFyfF
here’s a long discussion on it. looks like confusion over patent vs trademark. so call it something else than CYOA
That was helpful. That one user’s clarification of the case especially
tl;dr, afaict: Just don’t use the phrase “Choose Your Own Adventure”
I like both!
If you’re doing full colour, the right one is probably more efficient. Find a balance between detail and time spent, consider how long people are going to look at each panel and how much effort you need to put into each one.
Also, you may want to find a native German speaker, preferably with some experience in translation if it’s going to be in German.
Ja 😅🥲 Das ist meine Schuld
Ich wohne in Deutschland, aber munch Mal lasse ich meinen Muttersprache mich ein bisschen zuviel beeinflussen. Was nervt mich am meisten ist, dass meine Frau eine Deutsch Muttersprachlerin ist und hat nichts gesagt 🫠
Was genau ist die Problem mit meinem Text?
Dein Satz ist “where should I go?”, nicht wahr? Das wäre auf Deutsch “Wohin soll ich gehen?” oder, ein bisschen freier, “Wo soll ich lang gehen?” Jemand mit Erfahrung im Übersetzen kann mit Kontext die beste Formulierung finden.
Persönlich würde ich auch schreiben “Wer bin ich? Und wo?” Aber darüber kann man streiten.
A vote for the right side. The other one is fine for nighttime, with more desaturated colours
I like the art style you going with, def has that kid-like vibe
I have no idea about the coloring tho, cause it feels like it fits your style but I’m not sure if kids will like it or hate it🤷♀️
Thanks!
I’ll most likely flip a coin if it comes down to it 😅
